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An unpolished original song in progress.Worst Of All She's UnkindWhen I first met her, she was fine.Treated me good, all the time.I don't know why.. she changed her mind.Cause all she does now is treat me unkind.I don't mind she got fat.I can love a woman like that.I don't know why she got so mean.I ask her for water, she bring me gasoline.I don't care, that she got homely.Coulda' been my one and only.All she had to do was treat me kind.Now she's fat & ugly and worst of all.. unkind.I got a pocket full of empty, a heart full of pain.I'm leaving here - sorry I came.I don't know why.... she changed her mind.I can stand a lot of things but not a woman who's unkind.When I first met her, she was so fine.Treated me good, all the time.I don't know why.. she changed her mind.Cause all she does now is treat me unkind.I ask her for water, she brings me gasoline.All she does now is treat me unkind.
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Thanks, Eric. I wish I could hear you play!
It is my 10-year Uncle John Tribute!
I have my version of this one set up and practicing. Looking forward to doing Titties & Tires and Weiner Dog Run. It will be a fun night.
I get 33.97 % of anything over $100,000. Firm. Have fun. Thanks for using these songs,man!
Uncle John, I'd like to do this song at my next open mic. Not sure how you negotiate royalties????
Thanks, Chris.
Thanks, Gus. I will sell you a jug for $19.99.!!! But wait! Order before June and get a second jug free! Shipping and handling charges will apply. Kidding, Gus. I don't know. I should gets songs more polished. What I have learned is to try to feel what I am singing about and/or to act out the part.
Nice to come back and see you're still out there just killin' it. I don't know how you channel that "vibe" your songs always seem to have, but if you figure out how to bottle it, I'll buy a big jug.
Good, Eric.
Good verse, C.
all's you can do is climb
not because he looks fade I fell in love with her eyes
But they have sunk in she stairs like a barn owl
Sit and sharpens her knives