very very nice!! you should be proud of yourself with this song, the vocals and guit playing again is great .well done!! :) it seems every vid you post<> your talent keeps getting better and better.
thanks bear, and yeah that's good advice I think...I know it's not really like a full song, but to me it just felt complete, short as it is...was thinking of it as a little song on the end of the album. I always appreciate constructive advice as I'm new to all this and it really helps the learning process!!
Love it, especially when the line "Turn a light on for me" starts.
Don't take this as criticism, 'cause it's a really pretty song as is, but I was just thinking that if you added a bridge in another key, then came back to the original key, it could be really great. Or at least a little longer! :-)
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yet another really nice song cheers
Love it, especially when the line "Turn a light on for me" starts.
Don't take this as criticism, 'cause it's a really pretty song as is, but I was just thinking that if you added a bridge in another key, then came back to the original key, it could be really great. Or at least a little longer! :-)